tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7174970645573418196.post5763321270389386441..comments2023-08-27T07:59:34.096-06:00Comments on Dancing With the Dwende: No Longer the La Llarona StoryUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7174970645573418196.post-7555821920638516892007-11-09T08:15:00.000-07:002007-11-09T08:15:00.000-07:00I like it. Especially since I suspect that meetin...I like it. Especially since I suspect that meeting the ghost is the catalyst for the story, not the story itself. And the way you've worded it could mean that Ben makes it through the story to meet other ghosts. Could mean that his first ghost is also his last.Minion GIRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06066574883255927620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7174970645573418196.post-41289121975902636392007-11-08T17:22:00.000-07:002007-11-08T17:22:00.000-07:00I think it's a good title, but only if the most si...I think it's a good title, but only if the most significant part of the story isn't given away with the title. Case in point, I have a story that I like to tell that is more or less titled "The Time I got Hit by a Bike."<BR/><BR/>So, hopefully something more significant happens to Ben Bucater than just meeting a ghost.The One and Only Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05389030276109468709noreply@blogger.com